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Avon YOU Be The Writer–Prompt 5

By: Tessa Woodward
July 01, 2010

He: Is dark, handsome, and definitely more comfortable in the night. Dangerous? Absolutely. Supernatural? Well, not that he’ll admit…

She: Has never believed the legends, but now how can she deny it when the truth is right there in front of her? Oh, and there’s that pesky little secret she herself doesn’t want anyone to know.

This is it: the moment the truth comes out.

You know the drill. And remember, no fun prizes until we reach at least 25 comments.

  • Rosalind says: September 1, 2010 at 10:50 pm

    All those dates to find out the guy is a freekin Leprechaun. That is what I get for picking up the wrong glass as the tavern. The only green he wore was in his emerald eyes
    otherwise he blended in any crowd. How was I to know? Apparently they have more hair colors then red. He must have dyed it black.

    Shea O’Toole was 5 feet even, but that didn’t matter to me. He was short for a man but very tall for a Leprechaun. But he was funny and cute, outgoing and handsome, those green eyes lured so many women. They would crowd him until he put his arm around my shoulder that night.

    The night we met, he walked into the pub, banged on the bar and announced, “I can lick any man in the place.” Everyone burst into laughter and bought him a drink. Someone said in a jovial manner, “Don’t let the wee one harm us. Buy him a drink before he has the little people upon us.” A little later I overheard another say, “The finest whiskey for the little gentlemen.” and “Mr. Sullivan is turning over in his grave.” They told me Mr. Sullivan, and Mr. O’Toole, shared the exact same birthday and every year he entered the tavern in this manner.

    Shea would reply, “How can I deny the hospitality of such gracious hosts, as that are here tonight.”

    He didn’t have one of those high pitched voice, on the contrary it was full of bravado and passion, an Irish accent sprinkled with a hint Gaelic words here and there. He would sing the pub songs with the roar of a lion within him. He was a respectful man, to everyone, especially his mother. He would always start the first round with a salute to his mother. “Erin Beraugh” I think that was her name, and the crowd would join him in toasting her.

    For two weeks he showed me the Emerald Isle called Ireland. Every afternoon and every night we went out, except on Sunday. In the summer the sun sets around half past 11 o’clock but he always made sure I was home long before midnight. I thought it was strange so I asked him was there a reason. Why did he rush me back to my B&B on some nights, and at other times he was casual about seeing me home. Shea explained that it wasn’t safe for a stranger after midnight, “The evil sprits might put the come-hither on you, stealing your soul and making you their slave for eternity.

    “The Lochness Monster can do that?”

    He got all upset. Called me a “Shameless miss,” and swatted me on the rear, “Fer not knowing where as you are.” As if I was suppose to know that thing likes to swim in the same place, all the time.

    I told Shea not to worry, “Nobody could put the come-hither on me until I see a ring on this finger.”

    “You think I’m joking but once it happens, you can’t go back. You will be stuck in their world.” He kissed me and abruptly left when the clock tower struck. The beginning of the midnight hour was upon us, and once again he disappeared into the night. What a freak. I should have guessed then, he would only be trouble.

    On the last picnic I had with him there was a rainbow in the sky. A full bow with both arches falling on the open meadow, dotted with patches of wildflowers and clover here and there across the land, and under our tree. A gentle breeze rustled the leaves now and then.

    “Angela, what do you wish for out of life.”

    “Good friends, good company, good drink and the means to travel to see beautiful things like this, with good friends.”

    “You wouldn’t wish for money, power or fame?” He asked.

    “Well traveling isn’t free but as for being filthy rich, well, it doesn’t matter. Rich man, politician, and rock star can all end up penniless, unhappy and lying face down in the gutter. But a poor bastard with lots of friend will always find a kind word, a warm blanket, a bite to eat and work to see him through until he gets back on his own feet, if only to return the favor as a true friend should.”

    “Are you mad, girl? Well, what if you’ve seen all the world has to offer. Could you be satisfied that you lived your life to it’s fullest?”

    “It’s not just the places, but the people you meet in between. The friendships, their problems and the meals they share.”

    “I would’ve asked fer the gold.” Said Shea.

    “What gold? You mean at the end of that rainbow? And you call me crazy. Let me guess you’re the king of the Leprechauns and you’ll make my wishes come true. Then I wish for a handful kisses.

    “No, me father is still alive. I’m the prince of the Leprechauns and don’t waste me wishes.”

    I thought you had to catch a Leprechaun before he would grant you his wishes?

    Do ya not have me in your evil clutches now?

    “I’ve never held a prince before.” I guess I shouldn’t have pulled down to his zipper and slipped my hand in, but too late to take it back.

    “You yanks are bold creatures. Do you not fear the come hither?”

    I kissed him on the picnic blanket, “Let’s just stay out under the stars tonight.”

    “We can’t! Shameless Miss Toledo, what of the come hither. If we stay here, if we do this, they will put the come hither on you for sure.”

    As long as you are with me I don’t care. But I have to tell you something. I’m totally hairy from the waist down. I have not shaved my legs or anything else for a year. Does that bother you? Because I know it bothers a lot of men in the U.S. “

    “Do you want it to be gone forever Angela. Wish it and I will make it come true.”

    “Oh it doesn’t bother at all. I’m fine with the way I am, in fact, I think I would miss it. But are you are okay with that?” He smiled. “Good, because I don’t shave my privates either.” He looked at me like he didn’t understand.

    Your what?” He totally didn’t get it until I pointed to the front of my pants. He opened the front of my pants to have a look. “You people have strange customs.” The wind started to pick up, it was a strange sound. Not exactly like the whistling wind but more like the sound of crying. “We’ve got to go, you’ve no idea what that is!” He jumps with a start and removes his hand from my pants.

    “Please don’t stop Shea.” We both fell back on the blanket. We stayed until the flames of the setting sun vanished into the night. He noticed the stars dancing above.
    “The time! We must get you back home!”

    “If I make a wish it will be that you stay with me under this tree and the stars, and finished what you started until the sunrise tomorrow. How can you be my love when you leave me half finished?”

    “Ya don’t know what you’re asking dear. I’ve given you three wishes. Use them to get us out of here.”

    ”I wish…

    “I can’t stay til morning, I must return before the crack of dawn.”

    “Fine, then til before the crack of dawn, and you’ll keep me safe.”

    “How? If they see you, they will come for you.”

    “Then also make us invisible for tonight. And take me back to my room in town before you leave, then they won’t get me. ”

    Shea let out a sigh. It was against his better judgment but it was her wish. ”Granted” He kissed her neck and felt the fullness her breasts against his chest. The howling wind became shriller. He could do nothing but fulfill her wish. He picked a flower and placed it behind her ear. “Do you believe in ghosts Angela?

    “I suppose so. “

    “Good because tonight you’re going to see what most people are terrified of.” Shea uncrossed her legs and nestled his hips between them. They finished part of her wish and he held her, giving her a moment to rest. “Do ya not hear that sound?”

    “What? The weeping wind?”

    “The weeping wind indeed! Do ya not have sense enough to know what a shrieking wind at night means?”

    “That a storm is coming. It’s just the wind.”

    “ ‘Tis the wail of the banshee.”

    Stop. That lady with the dingy dark cloak over there is crying that’s all. She is with that man on the black horse behind her. She is probably crying because he won’t let her ride. She has to walk all the way home.

    Shea looked over his shoulder. “They are coming for ya girl. USE YOUR WISHES TO SAVE YOURSELF!!”

    “Banshees don’t have to walk they can fly even I know that. Also they don’t have boyfriends.”

    Then how is she faster than the galloping horse! The boyfriend, look at his Face! He’s headless. The horse look at it!

    I think your playing a joke on me. If you’re really a leprechaun I want a handful of gold coins.

    “DAMN IT GIRL. THAT IS YOUR THIRD WISH!”

    Then I felt the cold heavy coins force my hand open until some spilled over on the ground. “It’s true! What have I done!”

    The next thing I know Shea slipped a ring over my finger. “Twas the only way I could protect you.”

  • Georgina Moxley says: August 21, 2010 at 9:25 am

    I love you!!! His emails had recited the words over and over, allowing them to resonate in her hungry heart, before also rendering her mind desperate and confused.
    Kate glanced sideways at the storefront window, not catching a reflection of her gorgeous dangling blond curls and the wickedly sweet, gooey pink lipstick he found so utterly irresistible. And tonight, they would all be his, along with every tantalizing curve, crack and crevice that her stunning, oversexed body could throw his way.
    I need you!!! Erin had said it to her once too often, igniting in her a savagery she could no longer contain. She had tried to suppress it by pilfering from the city’s volunteer blood bank rather that getting it from him or some unsuspecting stranger. But fresh mental images of his insidious tongue hanging stares and moist, fiery kisses, had rekindled the ancient hunger behind her full lush lips. He had told her she was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen, but, unbeknown to him, she was also the most dangerous.
    Kate peeked at her all natural, long painted fingernails, so generously layered in a sensual shimmering pink. She had caught Erin gazing at them longingly, and had watched in stunned fascination as he gently placed those same gorgeous fingernails to his face, rubbing the stubble as though they were playful, razor sharp talons, a sign he had an uncontrollable fetish for her pink painted wares and soft, skillful fingertips.
    I adore you!!!. His ears had confirmed it, listening intently for hours to her voice as though he was supremely interested in everything she had to say. “Tell me more,” he would whisper seductively, “about your likes, dislikes, experiences, and above all, whatever it is i can do to make you very, very happy.”
    I want you!!! Kate had gathered as much from him by staring deep into his dreamy green eyes, so warm, charming and sincere. He had not allowed them to depart from her “astonishingly pretty face,” as she spoke, hanging off of every one of her succinctly chosen words. Neither had he succumbed to gazing at her amazing, gravity defying cleavage, as other men had so predictably done, other men who had also gravitated even more precisely towards fixating on the two giant bullets protruding into her silk blouses, as though she were an exquisite piece of meat. No, Erin wanted more than just her glorious, voluptuous body. He actually wanted HER! Body, mind and spirit!
    And now, she wanted him. She wanted HIM! After just one week of dating, today would be the day that she finally gave all of herself to him. But she would have to make it to their planned meeting place first, and he weather was not co-operating.
    The way to fisherman’s beach was obstructed by unusually heavy winds, which confiscated hats and sent swirls of street litter in every direction.
    I’m into you!!! She could tell by the way he had held her hand, so firm and purposeful, generating that ‘Idon’teverwannaletyougo’ sensation that caused her instinctively to press her lips to his caring cheek and rest a head upon his ‘youcanleanonmeanytime’ shoulder.
    Kate ducked suddenly as a street vendors newspapers were also drawn into the fray, whipping over her head and clinging onto scurrying pedestrians until their rustling sheets were funneled upwards by angry gales into the darkened clouds.
    Let me list the top ten things I love about you!!! Another feature of his enticing emails, which were invariably followed up with, let me list ANOTHER top ten things I love about you. It always succeeded in luring her further into the irresistible abyss of his methodical worship. And today, after showing him Alcatraz, she would show him her naked body.
    You turn me on!!! With Erin, the compliments never rained but poured. Yet you could tell he was so very sincere. Not like other men, who hurled such praises around like verbal sacks of trash, while pawing all over her like some horny teen octopus. But, like Erin’s constant downpour of compliments, Kate now braced herself for the heavy rains which were also immediately in the offing, feeling a few icy drops splash off her already chilled arm. She did not, however, dare contemplate opening her umbrella, knowing instinctively that the merciless winds would merely turn it inside out.
    As it was, the corner of Washington and Mason seemed overrun with a mist that had been rising from the bay all day long, patiently biding it’s time until the high spirited winds could spit it off of peoples faces.
    Kate therefore kept her face down, glancing upward only fleetingly every so often in the hopes of spotting an approaching cable car that could whisk her to her date with her beloved Erin. Erin! With always a kind word to say! Always brandishing encouragement while ‘ahhing’ and ‘ooing’ over what he considered to be her “many impressive talents.”
    She looked southward, wondering why no such ride was forthcoming, only to groan disappointedly at the sight of an abandoned cable car, no longer strutting its stuff at the usual fifteen miles per hour. It had instead succumbed to heady winds, which momentarily reached near hurricane force just long enough to pry it form it’s track, leaving it stranded at the bottom of one of San Francisco’s most famous roller coaster streets.
    She sighed afresh at the facts of life. If she were having problems getting to him, then he was likewise having problems getting to her, and no amount of wishful thinking was going to make it otherwise.
    She had spent her entire life in San Francisco, while he had lived there for a mere seven days. She had often met exciting hot guys by being a tour guide, and could occasionally even find one that tickled her vampy fancy. But Erin had proved to be so much more, having ignited in her the flames of unfettered love, a stunning sensation which was not only new to her, but also uncomfortably pleasant.
    Regardless of the damnable weather, her body had already promised itself a sexual feast, with Erin’s sinewy chest, rounded bum cheeks and stunning abs as the main course. For desert, she had scheduled the unveiling of the massive tell tale bulge, forever present in his pants. She would undoubtedly tease such a bulge into solid iron with a prancing, naked display of wind and grind, followed up with sucking lips, scraping teeth and a skilful tongue that would ensure the blood kept flowing to his giant erection all night long. Such blood could then be slowly and painlessly siphoned off by tiny pin sized protrusions along the edge of her parched and thirsty tongue.
    Her need for blood, love and sex now reached an irrevocable crescendo that was unbearably far to strong to deny. She tried to focus and reach him with her weary, hungry mind. If you can’t drive Erin, take the bus! If you can’t walk, crawl! If you can’t crawl, leap off the damn Golden Gate bridge and land in my lap! But just come to me! I need you! And I will find you…

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  • Stan says: July 8, 2010 at 4:45 pm

    Thanks for the awesome post!

  • Evangeline says: July 5, 2010 at 2:05 am

    Vivie Ulysse-Charles laughed at the tales Mama Titi used to whisper to her at night. Only the old ones, the unsophisticated, and the poor, believed in the loup-garou, that half-man half-beast whose sharp, shiny white teeth gobbled unsuspecting babies and women. Yet under the full moon of the third night of Carnival, she found it was quite easy to let her imagination ride with the rush and whoosh of the colorful crowd thronging Port-au-Prince’s streets.

    The Carnival celebrations of Haiti’s elite were held not under the stars, but under the genteel and correct electric lamps and rococo dada, and the ball hosted by Monsieur and Madame Ulysse-Charles was the most coveted event of the Season. Unfortunately for Monsieur and Madame, they had not a daughter to show off, as Vivie, though beautiful and stuffed to the brim with all the social graces, was lame.

    Vivie sat in a gilt-backed chair half-hidden from the swirling dancers, fortified with a glass of watered sherry and a small, stiff smile. Her lameness never bothered her except during balls, where she hadn’t even the ability to tap her feet (at least wallflowers could do that!), and any eligible young men who wished to speak with her soon grew bored with a young woman who didn’t ride, dance, pay calls, or anything of the activities other girls flung themselves into. And so Vivie was forced to nod blankly at their pleasantries, barred by her mother from betraying a hint of her library-born education.

    The orchestra moved into a Hungarian valse, which she hummed along with and watched new partners move onto the dance floor. There went her mother in burnished green silk, laughing gaily at whatever the broad-shouldered young man in uniform whispered in her ear as he led her into the waltz. Across the room, Tante Louise sipped champagne with her step-father, utterly engrossed in his conversation. A few cousins and second cousins dotted the crowd, as did longtime family friends. Vivie did not pity herself, but she grew angry that not one member of her family thought to speak with her, or fetch her a cooling drink that wasn’t watered. The smile she pasted on her face threatened to shatter as did the glass she held in her hand. She was supposed to be gracious and pleasant simply because she could not walk when there were times when she wanted to scream, and pout, and throw things about the room.

    The sudden movement of the gentleman who’d had his back to her then entire night caught her eye and she clutched her throat, wondering if she had given way to impulse and screamed. When their gazes collided, she clutched her throat tighter. Under his piercing silver-green stare she shivered despite the warmth of her step-father’s ballroom and her delicate wrap, and then flushed with the feeling that he could toss aside every layer of blue satin, Valenciennes lace, whalebone, and linen on her body with one glance. Vivie lowered her glance and held her fan before her face, hoping she looked demure and scandalized, all the while her heart tha-thumped in her chest.

    He bored the stamp of his strangeness in his clothing, which was impeccably tailored but lacked close-fitting Parisian-cut favored by Haitian gentlemen, and in his stance: bold, broad-shouldered, and arrogant. The type of gentleman who arrived on a semi-regular basis from the United States or England to tell the small nation of Haiti what to do and how to do it. And yet…she could not put her finger on why he seemed apart from the cluster of men with whom he conversed. It was more than his clothing or his demeanor; the look he gave her spoke volumes, of…”otherness.”

    This flash of intuitiveness startled her and Vivie fluttered her fan more rapidly, hoping to wave away any hint of the “gift” Mama Titi pushed on her. To her horror, however, the strange gentleman had caught her step-father, and both made their way in her direction. He was even more strange and handsome up close, all sharp angles and sepia skin, and his silver-green eyes took on an eerie cast as he stared at her over her uplifted hand.

    “Vivie, cherie,” Her step-father clasped her shoulder in false bonhomie. “permit me to introduce you to Monsieur Valerian Stratfield. An American visiting the consul this winter.”

    “My pleasure, Mademoiselle.” His French was impeccable, with the slightest hint of an American accent.

    “I cannot dance,” she blurted, half-furious with her body and half-furious with this stranger for not knowing.

    He merely lifted an eyebrow. “I thought you might like a turn in the gardens. Your chair has wheels does it not?”

    Vivie flushed furiously, so embarrassed she did not feel her step-father pinch her arm in rebuke. “I-I beg your pardon. Yes, my chair has wheels.”

    “If you would extend your permission, Monsieur Ulysse-Charles…?” Stratfield’s request was firm.

    Her step-father relinquished her arm and gestured for the American to take charge of her. He would be delighted to be rid of this lame daughter of his beautiful and able-bodied wife no matter if he tossed her to the wolves (Vivie was unaware of how apt this expression was). And so she sat stiffly in her wheeled chair as Monsieur Stratfield pushed her out of the ballroom, through the vestibule, and out into the winter garden. The air snapped with late winter cold, and she pulled her wrap closely around her body.

    “There is a gazebo just beyond the orange tree.” She directed, wanting to take command of this situation.

    Monsieur Stratfield obliged her words and pushed her chair towards the gazebo. It was simple and sturdy, a narrow plank allowing him to wheel her up and into the wooden garden structure. She felt, rather than saw him move to sit beside her on the bench, for the night seemed to have grown darker, the stars twinkling above her head when they first entered the garden suddenly obliterated.

    “It’s rather dark,” she commented nervously.

    “Is it? I can see you as though it were day.” He purred in her ear.

    She jumped, realizing his mouth was at her cheek, his breath warm against her skin. This frightened her more than any darkness and she turned, hands up to push him away. She stopped when her hands pressed against his rock-hard body.

    “You’re a werewolf!”

    His warmth suddenly disappeared. In the faint light now streaming into the gazebo, she could see him staring warily at her near its entrance.

    “What…How did you…of course I’m not a werewolf.” He finally gathered himself.

    “You are,” Vivie said emphatically.

    “All right, and if I am a werewolf, how did you discover this?”

    “I know.”

    “You what?”

    “I know.” She repeated, this time touching her temples.

    Vivie immediately regretted revealing her secret when Monsieur Stratfield’s teeth gleamed in the night. He prowled towards her with the grace of the loup-garou she accused him of being and stopped before her. His hands came down on her arms like a vise, pushing and holding her against the back of the chair as his teeth grazed the delicate skin of her throat.

    “Then you must be the petite mademoiselle I was sent to find.”

    • Amy Valentini says: July 5, 2010 at 12:04 pm

      Scary!! I love the french influence and the feel is great. I hope you’ll continue this one, that is if poor Vivie survived her encounter with the loup-garou!! Brava Evangeline!

      • Evangeline says: July 7, 2010 at 7:11 pm

        :D ! Thanks Amy. These prompts are so addictive!

        • Amy Valentini says: July 8, 2010 at 10:38 am

          I know what you mean, Evangeline! I search the site for them constantly, eagerly awaiting the next prompt. I come back every day to read any new submissions. Addicting is exactly the word but then it’s what I love most about this entire blog … it’s fresh, it’s new and there’s always something here that makes me smile and brightens my day. Great job, Avon Bloggers. <3

  • LouisaCornell says: July 2, 2010 at 11:53 pm

    Let me give this a try !

    Their eyes met across the swirling kaleidoscope and diamond glitter of the ballroom. A summer wind blew in from the formal gardens and brought with it the scent of roses, the inky velvet of the night and the man Bella St. George hoped never to see again. Damn him.

    His lips curved into the merest hint of a smile. The crush of brightly gowned ladies and crisply dressed men – the scene before her in all its jeweled glory faded until it was no more than a watercolorist’s rendering. Pale. Blurred. Faded. He alone held color and life. The lines of his face stood sharp and clean beneath the frame of hair so black as to appear blue beneath the light of the chandelier’s candles. Sea green eyes stared at her so intently she could feel his hands on her body. She shivered and burned all at once.

    He moved among the dancers, a dark tumultuous creature not even the most tormented of artists could capture. A leopard prowled through a herd of oblivious gazelles and she, the only one aware of the danger, refused to save herself.

    The ancient carved seal suspended between her breasts by a silver chain once touched by a saint began to grow heavy and hot. Her gift had not failed her. She knew what he was and she refused to flee, not even when the ebony surface of his boots stopped closed enough to touch the garnet red silk of her skirts.

    “Miss St. George.” His voice drifted across her skin like a caress. “I believe this is our waltz.” His bow, a negligible nod of his head distracted her just long enough for him to take her hand.

    She gathered her wits, the ones he’d scattered with just a smile. “I’m sorry, my lord. I don’t dance, especially not with men to whom I haven’t been introduced.”

    He towered over her, no mean feat when one considered her own ungainly height. Broad shoulders tapered down muscled arms defined to perfection by the cut of his coat and ended in hands sculpted by years of horses and swords. “I’m quite certain you know who I am,” he bent to whisper in her ear, his breath hot as the fires of hell. “All these weeks you’ve hunted me and now that I’ve fallen into your snare…” He snatched her into his arms and sailed her out onto the dance floor. “You don’t know what to do with me?”

    The brush of his thighs sent shocks of liquid flame into her belly and lower to places she dared not contemplate. He knew it. His eyes smoldered with the knowledge. The music washed over her and took control of her body. It had to be the music. She’d prepared too long for this battle to allow him the advantage he now took.

    “Lord Balingstoke, I—”

    “So you do know who I am.” His hand wandered from her waist to rest on the spot where her hip slid into her bottom.
    Bella caught herself before she arched into his touch like an eager kitten. The game was becoming dangerous. “You are Lord Adam Balingstoke. Your father is the Earl of Worthy.”

    “So I am.”

    “It doesn’t mean we’ve been introduced.”

    “That hasn’t stopped you from following me.”

    “Don’t be ridiculous. Why would I follow you?” The light from a thousand candles blended into one long ribbon of light. The pulse of the waltz throbbed in her chest. She felt as if they danced on that carpet of flame and no power on earth could save her.

    He brushed his thumb down the back of her hand. “If I were more vain and you less bright I might believe you followed me because you want me, Isabella.”

    “My friends call me Bella. To you I am Miss St. George, my lord.”

    He spun her into a turn and pulled her body flush with his. Still they danced and while the couples nearest them should have been scandalized they appeared not to notice. Bella searched his face and realized he was somehow responsible for the oblivion of those around them.

    His face lit with unholy pleasure at her involuntary start. He bent his head and touched his lips to her ear. “I know your name, Isabella. What I don’t know is why you refuse to use it and what you want from me.”

    “I don’t want anything from you.” She fought to steady her voice. He smelled of deep green forests, rain swept breezes and exotic spices. Bella wanted to close her eyes and sink into the paradise his scent promised. She couldn’t. She knew it was a lie and still she danced cradled in his arms.

    “Now that is a pity,” he murmured as his hand moved back up her side and his thumb stroked the underside of her breast. “For I want a great deal, Isabella.” Her name on his lips sent a ripple of sensual fire down her spine.

    Two could play this game. At the next turn in the dance she leaned into him. “Tell me who you are, Adam Balingstoke.”

    He never missed a step. His hands neither loosened nor tightened their hold. “I am the son of the Earl of Worthy. Have you forgotten so soon?”

    “And your mother, my lord, who is she?” The room grew hot as if the very air knew she played with fire.

    His eyes blazed to sunlit emeralds, but his smile remained. Tempting. Taunting. The dance ended. They stood taking each others measure for a moment and then dropped into the curtsy and bow ingrained by their genteel upbringing. Before she knew it he caught the silver chain between his thumb and forefinger and drew the jeweled seal from its hiding place. “You know who she is, Miss St. George. You have her ring.”

    The ebb and flow of society moved around them, ignorant of the impossible scene in which the two of them stood trapped. Bella’s head knew his words were improbable, impossible, but she’d known the existence of the impossible since she was nine years old. Her twenty year search for a legend had brought her to, of all places, a ballroom in London.

    “Queen Jezebel has been dead for nearly three thousand years,” she said evenly and took the seal from his open hand.

    “As have I.”

    She took a long steadying breath. “I know.”

    “So,” he said softly and turned her arm to peel back her white silk glove. He looked at the mark she’d born all her life. “It’s you.”

  • Bronwyn says: July 2, 2010 at 9:19 am

    Okay, I kinda suck at paranormal and I can’t write vampires to save my life but here goes…

    Sarah rubbed her eyes again. She hoped if she pressed a little harder this time there might be a reset button on her brain she could trigger. The scene playing out before her belonged in some bizarre teen movie rather than her bedroom.
    Her boyfriend of two years stood at the end of her bed in all his naked glory facing off against the man who’d broken the door down only seconds before. Only this guy didn’t look much like a typical man. He had shoulders that were at least a meter wide and fists that could pound a person through the floor Wiley Coyote styles. She wanted to tell Nathan to back the hell up but she was supposed to be frightened. Any normal woman would be.
    “I’ve called the cops,” Nathan said, his fingers curling into his palms on either side of his backside.
    The large man just laughed and peeked around Nathan’s bare shoulders. “Is this dude for real?”
    Sarah shrugged. There was nothing Hammer could do to her and she was pretty sure she could stop him from pulverizing her man to dust. Pretty sure.
    “Leave now,” Nathan said, taking a step forward. She always knew he had balls of steel but this put new meaning to the phrase.
    Hammer shook his head in disbelief. “Sarah, you have to come with me. Now.”
    “I’m not going anywhere with you,” she replied with a shake of her long blond hair.
    “You don’t have a choice. If you don’t come back this time, he’s coming to get you.”
    Nathan didn’t turn his back on Hammer but she could see the tense line of his shoulders tighten a fraction more. “Sarah, do you know this guy?”
    She hesitated. The truth was totally overrated. No, she couldn’t start with that. Here’s the thing? No, she doubted that would work either. While she discarded suitable excuses, Hammer took a step towards Nathan, his eyes glowing an unnatural red, a malicious grin on his lips.
    “Want me to throw out the trash?” Hammer asked with a chuckle.
    Sarah leaped from the bed. “Don’t you dare. He didn’t do anything wrong. He has nothing to do with any of this.”
    “Don’t get any closer, Sarah, you have no idea who you’re facing.” But it was Nathan himself who had no idea.
    Just as she opened her mouth to tell Hammer to go back to hell, Nathan shivered in the pale dawn light, his back muscles rippling like the surface of a pond after you threw a boulder in it. Something white flashed on the edges of her vision but then whatever it was caught the side of her cheek and she was knocked to the ground.
    As she fought to untangle her legs, she could see Hammer’s feet brace and knew he was going to wield one of his might ham hocks at Nathan’s head. She also knew the contact would kill him and she couldn’t let an innocent man die just because she had father issues.
    “Nathan, get down!” she screamed. Back on her knees, she looked over the bed just as there was a mighty thud that shook the floor. Closing her eyes, she let her head fall on the mattress and did something she never did. She prayed. She loved Nathan and she hadn’t ever wanted him to get hurt. She prayed God would take him, look after him.
    A hand came to rest on her shoulder and she was about to shrug away from it when she realized it wasn’t a huge awkward sausage fingered hand and it didn’t burn with the intense heat of Hell. Her eyes snapped open and she lifted her head so fast she almost got whiplash.
    A half a second later, she wished she was the one out cold on the floor. Nathan was still standing. Well, hovering. Coming out of his back were two wings. White, fluffy, feathery, massive. The wingspan had to be a good three meters, almost touching opposite walls.
    “Holy shit,” Sarah breathed.
    Nathan’s angry glare kept switching back and forth from her to the giant on the floor. “Want to tell me why a demon would be breaking your door down in the middle of the night?”
    “Uh… Um…”
    He shook his head and the motion sent a flutter through his wings. They really were amazing.
    “Do you want to start with something a little simpler?” he asked, his tone heavily laced with sarcasm.
    Sarah nodded.
    “Who the hell is coming to get you? Is he worse than this guy?”
    She nodded again.
    Nathan lifted a brow and waited.
    “My dad is coming to get me,” she finally confessed. There were so many questions she wanted to ask him. Like how she hadn’t known he was an angel. More importantly how he hadn’t known her identity and it was very clear from his confusion that he still had no idea. But she bit her tongue instead. This was not going to end well for either of them.
    “Who is your dad, Sarah?”
    She stared down at the diamond on her left hand. “Well, he usually goes by The Devil but I think under the circumstances you can call him Lucifer.”

  • Amy Valentini says: July 2, 2010 at 1:32 am

    This is a chapter from my newest project … the chapter where they meet for the first time.

    The day had been long and uneventful. Selena looked around the shop and sighed. There had only been one customer all day. She supposed the rain kept the shoppers home and since her antique shop wasn’t the busiest of shops on a good day, she was grateful even one person had ventured inside. She leaned on the counter and gazed out the front window. In front of her on the counter was her dinner, a hamburger and fries from the café across the street. She picked up the can of soda that she had retrieved from the small refrigerator she kept in the back and snapped the tab open. She loved the sound of the hiss that always emanated from a can of soda when it was first opened, it reminded her of the pet snake she had once so many years ago. Galen refused to allow her to have another after it died and she honestly missed the old thing.

    The front door suddenly opened ringing the little bell that hung above the door. The sound surprised Selena. She hadn’t expected another customer so close to closing time. She glanced toward the door and a man stood there damp from the rain. He was very tall nearly filling the doorway.

    “Good evening, sir, may I help you?” Selena greeted him cheerfully.

    The man didn’t answer right away but brushed the water from his long dark coat and shook droplets from his incredibly thick black hair. When he glanced up, he looked at her from under dark brows. Selena stared directly into nearly black eyes. When she saw those eyes worry flushed over her and her hands began to shake but then his thoughts came flooding forward. As she read his thoughts, she smiled. He was incredibly sensual, she thought. He was attracted to her and she didn’t mind. There was something odd about this human’s thoughts. His thoughts were dark and tinged with danger and a lot of aggression.

    “I was really just looking for someplace to get in from the rain.” The man spoke in a very deep melodic voice. “If you don’t mind, I’d just like a few moments and maybe to look around.”

    “Of course, please take your time. If there’s anything I can show you,” Selena paused as an image of him kissing her rushed through her head. This man’s thoughts were very aggressive, she thought. She was used to human males and their constant thoughts of sex but this man was very different. “Is there something in particular that drew you in tonight?”

    The man who had been moving slowly through the shop glancing at an item here and there, stopped and looked over his shoulder at her. He smiled. Something in that smile made Selena very nervous but not really afraid.

    “You.” The man replied and started toward the counter.

    Selena took one step backwards away from the counter. She wasn’t sure why she had but the man seemed to take up all the space in the shop. The man stopped at the counter looked down at the half-eaten hamburger and fries and grimaced as if he found it distasteful. She supposed he must be a vegetarian and the food offended him. Sorry, fella, that’s my dinner and no one asked you, she thought.

    “I must admit that I have been kind of watching you.” The man spoke in a low voice as if he didn’t want to be overheard yet there was no one else in the shop. “I’m new in town. Only a few days and don’t know many people. I noticed you the other day and thought you the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen.”

    Selena was impressed that this man simply spoke his mind. She believed he was sincere for his thoughts revealed it as a truth. He was devastatingly handsome and it pleased her that he thought she was beautiful. It was a shame that he was human and not a member of the race. “Thank you for the compliment, sir.” She answered in return, a blush rising on her cheeks. “That’s very kind of you to say but honestly, sir, you really shouldn’t go around telling women that you’re watching them. Someone might mistake you for a stalker or worse.”

    The man laughed aloud and the sound filled the shop. He had a fabulous laugh, she thought. As she watched him, she tried not to listen to his thoughts but she couldn’t help herself for they were filled with so much sensuality and he really was attracted to her. She smiled timidly as he laughed at her statement.

    “No, my beauty, I’m not stalking you. I just find you very attractive and most intriguing.” He remarked staring into her dark eyes. “You find me very handsome, don’t you?”

    Selena was taken aback by this question. “Well, you are very handsome, sir.”

    He smiled again and glanced around the shop. “My name is Lucien. Lucien Moreau.” He smiled at her again. “You have some very old items in your shop. You must be an excellent collector.”

    “I know a lot of people willing to sell me their beautiful antiques.” Selena admitted. It was true for many of her friends and family sold off many of their possessions before moving onto the next place. Some had original pieces dating back two hundred years or more.

    “Selena, will you join me for a bite?” Lucien asked without looking at her then turned to look at her directly and added. “A bite to eat, that is?”

    For a brief moment, Selena thought she had seen something else in his thoughts, something menacing but it disappeared too quickly for her to grasp it. “I’ve dinner right here and it is another hour before I close the shop.” She replied quickly for instincts told her to turn him away. “I thank you for your offer, Mr. Moreau.” When she read sadness and regret in his thoughts, she quickly added. “Perhaps some other time.”

    “Yes, some other time.” Lucien said slowly.

    Selena felt the man trying to reach into her thoughts and quickly blocked him. She stared at him and wondered if it was possible that he was a member of the race after all. No, she thought, if he was she wouldn’t be able to read his thoughts at all. Suddenly, she read fear in his thoughts and when she glanced at his face she saw him looking around the shop nervously. She tried to read this thoughts further but she suddenly couldn’t see anything.

    “I’ve taken up too much of your time, my beautiful Selena.” Lucien said, reaching for her hand. She allowed him to take thinking he wanted to shake it but when he lifted her hand and he pressed a kiss into the palm, she nearly fainted. This man was incredible, she thought and the mere touch of his lips on her skin made her weak in the knees. Something is very strange with this man. How did he know her name? She didn’t remember telling him her name. She was just about to ask him further questions to discover who he really was when he suddenly turned and walked toward the door. The bell rang again as he opened the door. He stopped there allowing the sound of falling rain to fill the shop. “May I come to visit again?”

    Selena nodded her head. Then he was gone and the door closed shut behind him.

    “I don’t want you going near that man again.” Galen said from behind her. Selena nearly leaped out of her own skin at the sound of her father’s voice.

    “Good grief, Galen!” She exclaimed as she turned to find him standing directly behind her. “You nearly scared me to death. How long have you been standing there?”

    “Not long enough and surely it would take more than my surprising you with my presence to scare you to death as you put it.” Galen replied with a teasing smile. The light above him reflected off one of the long fangs protruding from his upper jaw. It reminded Selena of those corny ads when the sleazy spokesperson grins and one of his teeth sparkles. She almost laughed at the image but she suspected from the serious look on her father’s face that he wasn’t in the mood for levity. She watched him walk around the counter toward the door and peer out into the darkness of the street. “I know this man and he is up to no good. He hasn’t a good reputation among the race.”

    “The race!” Selena couldn’t believe her ears. “He isn’t a member of the race, he’s human.”

    “Not at all, child. He’s probably close to four hundred years old by now.” Galen said as he pulled up a chair and sat.

    “No.” Selena came around to the front of the counter to face her father. “He can’t be. I could read his thoughts.”

    Galen frowned. “Impossible.”

    “His thoughts were filled with hunger, a dangerous aggression and lascivious acts of passion.” Then with panic rising in her voice, she added. “And they were all directed at me.” She shouldn’t have been able to read his thoughts if he was Vampirian. She might not be exactly like the rest of the Vampirian race but she had many of their attributes. She had their longevity of life, their strength and their ability to read the minds of humans.

    Galen frowned again and added a small growl. “It can’t be.” He looked at his daughter and frowned again. Suddenly, his black eyes widened and he shook his head in disbelief. “Could it be possible?”

    “Could what be possible?” She asked confused by what her father had implied.

    “Lucien Moreau just might be your life mate.” Galen suggested.

    “Impossible!” Selena cried out as she hurried to the front door of the shop and quickly locked it. She flipped the sign that hung in the window from Open to Closed and pulled down the shade that covered the glass in the door. “The man is gorgeous and very intriguing and I even found myself wishing he wasn’t human but he can’t be my life mate. You’ve told me for the past one hundred and fifty years that I will never be able to mate because I’m caught between Vampirian and Human.”

    “I know I have but I might be wrong.” Galen replied, a frown still furrowing his dark brow. He lifted his hands and ran his long fingers through his silver streaked black hair. He lowered his hands and stared up at his daughter. Her eyes were filled with confusion. “There is the legend.”

    “That’s all it is. A legend. A story.” Selena whispered as if she were fearful someone would hear. “You told me yourself that it’s impossible for a Vampirian and a human to mate unless the human has been transformed.”

    “My dear, you’re not really human. Remember?” Galen said with a sly smile and shrug of his broad shoulders.

  • Dara Young says: July 1, 2010 at 12:31 pm

    Grant and I walked along the dark street. The loud thump of the base from the club still thundered through my body, seemingly contained by the heavy drape of his arm across my shoulders. That’s probably why I missed the warning signs. I knew better than to let my guard down. I should have been paying more attention to the shadows. That’s where they lurk, waiting for an unsuspecting human to amble by. In the blink of an eye, they snatch their victim and bleed them dry.
    Vampires.

    As we walked it seemed that the majority of the street lamps were out. That was the first clue that I missed. Some vampire hunter I am. Thousands of years of hunters in my family, I didn’t want to be the one that died at the hands of those we hunted. And I damn sure didn’t want to see Grant slaughtered by one of them. But as it turned out, I didn’t catch the second clue either. The preternatural calm of the environment was lost on me as I allowed the nearness of Grant’s body and our prior session of grinding on the dance floor to stir my desire to the point I missed the stillness around me. It wasn’t until the cross hanging around my neck began to glow with the soft blue light that indicated a vampire was near that I knew we were in trouble.

    Shit!

    I had to protect Grant, but I couldn’t do that without him knowing the truth about me. It wasn’t a truth I was ready to share. My body sure, but not my secret. But it was too late. He spotted the glow of the cross just as the creature lunged from the shadows. I reached down to my boot and drew the stake in one swift motion. That’s when things got really confusing. I tried to push Grant behind me, but he wasn’t there, next to me. I looked around confused. That’s when I saw the two bodies entwined in the shadows.

    “No!” I heard my voice ring out against the brick and pavement of the alley.

    I surged toward the writhing heap intent on saving the man I loved. What? Love? I had no clue, before that moment that I was in love with him. Ain’t that a bitch? I shook off the wayward train of thought and focused on the fight. I just needed a clear shot, front or back, at his heart. But the two were moving so fast I could barely track them as they bounced from wall to wall.

    Then the moon slid out from behind a cloud and shone down into the alley. That’s when my world turned upside down. Grant threw his head back and fangs extended from his mouth. Fangs! Men don’t have fangs. Not human men and not the men I love.

    I never bought into all the hokey legends about vampires. You know the garlic, the holy water, three bites and you are one. Nah. That’s all tall tales and children’s stories. A stake to the heart, that’ll kill’em every time. It would kill you too by the way. Vampires sucking humans dry. Truth. Seen it too many times to believe otherwise.

    But Grant? What was he? How did he fit in to this picture? We had dates that started before sundown, we kissed hundreds of times. My cross never glowed near him. How is he a vampire and I didn’t know it?

    As I stood there dumbfounded, Grant finished the fight and ripped the throat out of our attacker. He quietly fished a hanky out of his leather jacket and wiped his face up.

    “Kara.” He stepped toward me and I stepped back.

    “Y-you. Your one of them.” I could hear the stammer and cringed. I hadn’t done that since I was 6.

    “No. Yes.” His face fell. “Partially. My father was but my mother was human.”

    “Oh God!” I turned and started running.

    “Kara! Wait.” I heard him call after me.

    I thought I heard him say he loved me, but I was too busy running to be sure I heard that right. I ran like a mob of vamps were after me.

    The last vampire hunter, and I was in love with a half-breed.

  • Amy Valentini says: July 1, 2010 at 10:20 am

    Awesome! Falls right in line with my newest work … I’ll be back later with an excerpt! I do so love this blog!! Happy July everyone and for the Canadians, Happy Canada Day!


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