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Avon invites YOU to be the writer

By: Esi Sogah
April 28, 2010

We know a lot of you commenters (and lurkers) like to write, and we’re here to create a space for you to do what you like. Every two weeks, we’ll post a story prompt–might be character descriptions, a setting, an opening line–and it’s up to you to give that story life. Post your take in the comments below.

This is all about you–this is not only a chance for you to get a little creative burst, but it’s also to start a discussion. So talk to each other in the comments (nicely!)–after all, what is writing but a conversation between author and reader?

One lucky commenter (chosen at random) will win a lovely prize from the Avon vaults. But we can’t pick a winner until we reach 25 comments, so go to town!

Prompt of the week: HE–former high school baseball star who flopped in the pros. Now, he’s back in town to coach the local minor league team. SHE: Could write epic volumes on what it takes to be the biggest nerd in your high school. Now, she’s the principal.

Your mission: Write the dialogue of the first time they see each other again.

Have fun–happy writing!

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  • Lucy Tamajon says: May 16, 2010 at 10:11 am

    Thanks, Amy. On-line dating is definitely the “next” thing in romance.. although, I’ll be honest, I don’t find it romantic at all..

    I’m actually working on a “dark” romance… have the first 3 chapters going but sort of stuck. Maybe I should post the beginning of that and get some feedback.

    Lord knows I need all the critic I can get :)

    • Amy Valentini says: May 16, 2010 at 10:50 pm

      Lucy, romance is where you find it. If you had asked me twelve years ago whether or not I would consider online dating, I would have said absolutely NOT but then something amazing happened. One night while chatting with my best friend and her boyfriend in a chat room, I met a man. It took him ten days to wear me down to where I would finally consent to a date with him. We will be married ten years this September. Romance is everywhere and it can happen when you least expect it.

      As to your “dark” romance, maybe the next prompt will give you a chance to post part of it and we can all critique it. In the meantime, ask someone you trust and who will be brutally honest to read those chapters and give you some feedback. Another trick, if you’re stuck, is to put it away for a few days then start reading from the beginning and see where it takes you. Good luck and don’t give up. : )

  • Katrina says: May 14, 2010 at 6:21 am

    Erm, Esi, whatever happened to this? I was eagerly awaiting the next prompt this week. And who won the prize from the vault?

  • Lucy Tamajon says: May 13, 2010 at 9:37 pm

    It just came to me. Thought I’d give the old classic love romance a new “twist” :) Let me run with this…

    • Amy Valentini says: May 16, 2010 at 12:49 am

      Lucy, It is a very clever ‘twist’ on the classic. In fact, a few years ago, a modern contemporay twist on dating was (and still is, I guess) online dating but now with everyone connecting on FB, it’s like FB has become the 21st century’s singles bar only it includes folks from all over the world. You could do a lot with that plot line – I say run with it indeed!

      And yo – Avon Editors, when are we going to get the next prompt??? It’s time for some more fun …. please! : )

  • Lucy Tamajon says: May 12, 2010 at 5:58 am

    It had been a day like so many others before. A hectic day at school consumed with teacher-parent conferences, paper work and red tape, and one complaint after another. She remembered when she was a student. Life had seemed so simple then. Teachers were teachers, kids went to school to learn, and parents supported the teachers and disciplined their children.

    Now, everything was an issue. She, sighed, memories of those young care-free days all coming back to her. The rolls had been reversed now. She was no longer the geeky student but the geeky Principal She shook her head. It was hard for her to believe that she was in charge of the school where she had once sat quietly as a student consumed by books and oblivious to the every day excitement of her friend’s teenage lives.

    Katherine was sitting back relaxing at home with a glass of wine, now. It was quiet at home and she would just enjoy the down time. She knew she shouldn’t do it but was tempted and couldn’t resist.. Face Book. she giggled. She loved to spend a little time reading the status of those that were having so much more fun than her. Her life seemed so mundane, so ordinary.

    Katherine sat back. There was a message and a new friend request. “Hi, remember me?” She squinted Tried to picture the face on the small tiny photo, but couldn’t. She looked at the name and whispered it several times as she sipped her wine. “No, it couldn’t be.” She thought.

    Her memories of Joe had faded away. They had been stored in a box, locked, and buried. Suddenly, the the flood gates were opened and her heart came alive for the first time in a long time.

    “Yes.” She remembered him and all that he had meant to her.

    • Amy Valentini says: May 13, 2010 at 12:32 am

      Love the ulta modern twist on this, Lucy … FaceBook, of course, it’s how everyone connects these days. I would love to know what he had meant to her and will she ‘friend’ him? Good job.

  • Tiffany M. says: May 9, 2010 at 2:44 am

    Batter Up. (in italics)

    She had read it in the papers and heard the gossip at work and in town, but to actually see Gordon Mitchell back in town, back in her school, finally allowed the information to process in her brain.

    He was back.

    She watched him saunter down the aisle towards her as she froze with her hand on the box of Golden Grams cereal.

    His smiled broadly as he oozed false charm with his greeting of “Amy Mittens, long time no see.”

    The arrogant man expected her to remember him. She dropped her hand from the cereal box. Well, he was right. She did.

    “It would have been longer if you hadn’t been drop-kicked out of the majors,” she replied sweetly with a similarly broad smile.

    Strike One.(in italics)

    His right eye twitching and the hardening of his smile were the only indications he actually heard her comment.

    “Shame, that,” he told her with a careless shrug. “But, you know the saying with life and lemons.” He continued to smile at her.

    She tightened her hands on the handle of the cart. She’d finish her shopping later. “Yeah, but I wouldn’t exactly call Crockersfield’s Cows lemonade.”

    Strike Two.(in italics)

    “You know about the coaching job?” he asked.

    “Everyone in town knows about your job coaching the Cows.” Amy began to push her cart by him. “What everyone wants to know is where you’ve been since you came to town.”

    “Everyone?” he asked, tilting his head to the side in question as he smiled down at her.

    Cursing herself for swapping her heels for her flats in the car, Amy answered with mock cheer, “Everyone at Kimsey High will be thrilled to know what grocery store you shop at. It’ll be the biggest gossip.” Maybe he would catch the sarcasm with the hidden double meaning. Oh, Gordon Mitchell and his hidden double meanings like telling her she was his secret girlfriend, and then dating other girls. They just weren’t secret to anyone but her. Or, how he’d give up his baseball for her if she’d take him back, and then he left town with his Babe Ruth autographed ball in her possession.

    Gordon chuckled, placing his hand down, holding her cart. “Amy,” his familiar use of her name rattled her after ten years of silence, “high school is over.” He leaned towards her and softened his voice. “Kimsey High was never as kind to you as it was to me, but you’ve got to let it go.”

    Amy blinked at him. “I work at Kimsey High School. I’m the principal,” she told him flatly.

    Strike Three. (in italics)

    He hadn’t heard. He hadn’t bothered to look her up at all in the past ten years, and then he comes up to her, no, saunters up to her, acting as arrogant as ever, even after bombing out of a major league ball team that made him a town hero, and what? What did he expect her to do?

    It was his turn to blink stupidly at her as his cocky smile dropped from his face.

    “What do you want Gordon?” she asked warily, not hiding her impatience to leave.

    He put his hands in his pockets and smiled sheepishly at her. “Another chance? A fresh start? To try this again?”

    Amy had a feeling he was using his double talk again, but she wasn’t going to fall for it. If he wanted to talk to her, he had his chance for ten years. She thought she moved on the year after he left, and it irritated her that he could still get her as riled up as he had the day after he drove away.

    “Sorry, Gordy,” she used his old nickname she detested, “you know what they say about three strikes.” She pushed her cart past him and up the aisle.

    “Three?” he called from behind her. She heard his footsteps following her. “I thought I had two.”

    “You should’ve struck out more, Gordy, then maybe you would have learned how to count higher,” she told him over her shoulder.

    Amy shoved her cart out of the aisle and stopped, an idea coming to her as she saw a group of women wearing Cow paraphernalia coming towards her with two carts full of party supplies. Stifling her plotting smile to plaster on surprised shock, she turned around to Gordon’s handsomely uncertain expression and shouted, “It’s Gordon Mitchell! It’s him! It’s Gordon Mitchell!”

    “Excuse us!” The women plowed past her squealing creating the distance and distraction she needed to escape. With a little wave over her shoulder, Amy smiled to herself as she headed to the checkout stand.

    You’re Out. (in italics)

    • Amy Valentini says: May 10, 2010 at 11:20 pm

      Very Good, Tiffany … glad you posted … I loved her means of distraction so she could make her escape and her remark about his maybe striking out more often so he’d know how to count higher. Great line. Good job!

  • Agnes says: May 4, 2010 at 3:00 pm

    I agree… the prompt is a great way to get the brain rolling, too – I mean, by the time I finished flushing out the scene above, maybe an hour, tops, I already knew the complete story arc of both my heroes, that my heroine only took the principal’s job because her father was ill, and that the hero had lost his major league status by covering up for a teammate who had then stabbed him in the back, and that by the end he would learn to trust again and she would learn to appreciate herself a little more and embrace her roots. And that the coaching opening at the school was for the girl’s team – which of course is rich with potential conflict. (Funny the girl’s team thing came up in someone else’s, but with a completely different attitude.)

    And thanks for the great comments!

    And the fun reads :-)

    • Amy Valentini says: May 4, 2010 at 11:13 pm

      I know what you mean, Agnes, I’ve already outlined my story and have started developing the characters. I love the developing stage, it’s when I usually fall in love with the hero so that I can live out the romance through my heroine while I’m writing it. Good luck with yours and have loads of fun.

  • Nancy says: May 4, 2010 at 7:51 am

    Sounds awesome. I’ll have to put it in the date book for sure! Yeah, you guys rock. This is an awesome experience! I’m having a blast.

  • Amy Valentini says: May 3, 2010 at 3:13 pm

    I’m with y’all, I’ve been checking back often … if we don’t do an Avon FanLit then maybe we should do this fun exercise every week instead of every two weeks … how ’bout it, Esi?? BTW, who one the prize from the vault?

  • Paroma says: May 1, 2010 at 11:54 pm

    Avon held a FanLit Weekly in 2006 where we could send chapters according to weekly prompts for several weeks and each time the judges (people like Julia Quinn) would eliminate some of the contestants. In the end, just the winner remained!
    So, has Avon done anything similar ever since?
    I was wondering, since so many people have participated in this blog, perhaps now is the time to have another Avon FanLit weekly?

    • Katrina says: May 3, 2010 at 3:42 am

      That’s such a great idea! I’ve come back to read this post almost every day since it was posted, just to see what new stories were added and if anyone had comments about mine.

  • Fotini says: May 1, 2010 at 8:58 am

    “Mrs Ferdison? Mr Stewart Gayles would like to see you”

    Eliza cleared her glasses and nodded indifferently to let him in. She kept staring at the paper pile that waited for her signature with despair, as if she was unconsciously asking herself “when am I going to finish up with all these?” Preoccupied with her inner thoughts, she hardly noticed that a man had entered the room.

    “Oh my Gosh! Liz! It is you!” Stewart was very happily surprised to meet her again. However, Eliza felt somehow annoyed by his unreasonable intimacy.

    “Excuse me? I’m Mrs Ferdison to you, Mr…” She couldn’t even remember his name.

    “Yeah, right. Whatever. Oh, Liz you haven’t changed at all!” said he contently.

    “Haven’t I? That’s interesting.” she replied abstracted, still trying to remember his name.

    “Of course you haven’t. Gee, I was told that you were teaching here, but this? I mean, look at you! “Mrs Nerdison”, the principal of Green Valley’s High School! Wow!”

    “What? I’m sorry, but are we supposed to know each other?”

    “Come on! You can’t be serious. You are kidding me, right?”

    “Mr Gayles” she finally remembered it “do I look funny to you?”

    “Why, no…”

    “Or maybe you think that I have no other business to do than fooling around.”

    “Of course, not. But…”

    “Well, instead of insulting me or playing childish games, please come directly to the point of your visit.”

    “I see. You are still mad at me. I just thought that after all these years… I mean, we are grown ups now.”

    “Mr Gayles, I’m out of patience and time. I’m afraid you have to go. I would gladly escort you to the door, but you see I have this tiny problem with my legs. They don’t obey me, since that accident…”

    “Oh my Gosh! Liz, you are sitting on a wheel-chair!”

    “Good point, Mr Gayles. Are you always so observant?”

    “Oh, I’m terribly sorry. I didn’t mean it that way. It was the desk. I couldn’t see. I’m so sorry…”

    “No, Mr Gayles. I am sorry. I totally ran out of time and you have to leave.”

    “Oh, ok. Maybe I’ll pass by tomorrow.”

    “Or never.” she murmured “Goodbye Mr Gayles.”

    “Goodbye Liz.”

    Stewart left puzzled and sad. He certainly didn’t see that coming. “Liz is on a wheel-chair” he kept telling to himself all along the school corridor.

    Eliza approached the window. There he was, slowly walking towards the yard exit. “What an annoying man!” she uttered in relief.

  • Evangeline says: April 30, 2010 at 9:11 pm

    Oh crud, I’m late! Must add this blog to my rss feed. Even though I’m sure 25 stories have been reached, here’s my take:

    The ball hit the bat wielded by a burly teenager with a resounding thwack that made Veronica Peyton wince for the bat. The baseball sailed into mid-field amidst the cheers of the boy’s teammates and groans of the opposing team. Below her came a low, piercing whistle, and she looked down from where she stood in the bleachers to see the backwards ballcap of the coach as he strolled from the dugout to peer at the boys rounding the bases.

    She was suddenly hot beneath her high collar and neatly-tailored jacket despite the cool October afternoon and without Will St John even looking at her with his piercing blue eyes, she felt awkward and tongue-tied, completely forgetting her reasons for visiting the field. Veronica took an anxious step backwards and nearly tumbled over when the backs of her knees collided with the flipped-up seat.

    As the eyes of the ballplayers jogging towards the dugout quickly turned in her direction, she had a flashback to junior high, P.E. to be specific:

    Her chest burned with the effort to run from first to second base. Ronnie pumped frantically with one arm, using the other to hold her glasses up on her nose.

    Oh, the base was so close.

    Lia Thompson crouched at second with her mitt, furiously chomping on her gum with a sneer at the rapidly approaching Ronnie.

    For once in her life, her classmates were cheering her on, and Ronnie tapped into a hidden reserve of energy to hurtle towards second base just as Lia stretched to catch the ball thrown her way.

    Ronnie could see it in her mind’s eye: slide into second, be safe, help her team win the game, and she’d finally win the admiration of Will.

    Unfortunately, this was the wrong time for daydreams. A misstep and loosened shoe-laces resulted in a mouthful of dirt and skinned knees just inches from second base, where Lia smirked, the baseball firmly in mitt.

    Ronnie helped herself up to the symphony of snickers and boos, as her Out! pulled the team from the dugout and onto the field.

    “Great going clumsy!” A voice jeered at her.

    Will and his boys, all of whom looked at her in unconcealed disgust when they trooped onto the field.

    “Great going clumsy!”

    Veronica startled from her reverie when Will touched her.

    “What did you say?”

    He frowned a bit, hands grasped around her shoulders.

    “I said, are you okay?”

    “I’m fine,” Veronica brushed his arms away and stepped back (making certain the row of chairs were safely out of range). She straightened her blazer and blinked at the curious faces turned her way.

    She needed to grab a hold of the situation. She extended a hand for Will to shake. “Coach St John, I presume? Dr. Veronica Peyton.”

    His blue eyes were as piercing as ever as they scrutinized her. “Peyton…Peyton…” His grip tightened. “Ronnie Peyton? That scrawny little bookworm from high school?”

    “Dr. Peyton, if you don’t mind, Coach St John.”

    He smiled, flashing his dimples, and leant against the bar, allowing his eyes to lazily peruse her body from the tips of her sensible Oxford pumps to the top of her neat chignon.

    “Of course…Dr. Peyton.”

    “Coach St John,” She said coolly, putting bite into her words. “I have requested a meeting with you about taking over duties as coach to the ladies softball team twice this week, and you have yet to respond. Shall I take your silence to be your agreement?”

    St John straightened abruptly. He made a motion with his hands that caused his team to disperse. The charming blue of his eyes were a steely blue-gray. “Hell no I don’t agree. I came to Rio Hacienda on the condition that I run the program my way, and that doesn’t include coaching the girls softball team.”

    “Need I remind you of Title IX, Coach St John?”

    “Perhaps you do, Dr. Peyton,” He ducked beneath the railing and jumped into the bleachers to face her. “Perhaps you could instruct me on the intricasies of the law on an intimate basis?”

    Veronica steeled herself inwardly–which was difficult to do with a mad, sweaty six foot three baseball player bearing down on her.

    “I don’t need to instruct you on the law, Coach St John. You could lose your position if it became known that you are a complete sexist.”

    He stopped in mid-step, expression so cold it could freeze a volcano. “Fine.” He spat, eyes narrowed. “I’ll coach the girls softball team–but only if you join it.”

    • Nancy says: April 30, 2010 at 9:31 pm

      Oh, not late at all. I’d say the Doctor was right on time! WHOO HOOO some hot stuff going on. Those lucky little girls. Sigh.

    • Amy Valentini says: April 30, 2010 at 9:50 pm

      You had me totally hooked, Evangeline, right up until she made the remark about him being “a compete sexist.” Good lead in but then it’s as if you had him bunt with his return line. I think you could’ve come back with a better retort from him. The opening was there but then it lost steam. Otherwise, I was thoroughly enjoying it! Good job.

      • Evangeline says: May 1, 2010 at 10:23 pm

        Thanks Amy! I completely agree with you now that I’m reading it over again! Perhaps I can do a retake? *g*

        • Amy Valentini says: May 6, 2010 at 12:48 am

          Go for it, Evangeline! Nothing wrong with a retake … just his response to her accusation of him being a “complete sexist”, I like the rest too much for you to change it. : )

    • Katrina says: May 3, 2010 at 3:37 am

      I love it that she’ll have to join the team. What fun!

      • Amy Valentini says: May 6, 2010 at 12:56 am

        Katrina, I like his remark about her joining the team too … it was the lead up to that remark that wasn’t quite right … Evangeline had captured a real tension there and it seemed to fall flat … maybe if instead of “‘Fine.’ He spat, eyes narrowed.” … it had read … “Fine.” He spat, then as an interesting thought crossed his mind, he smiled slyly and added. “I’ll coach the girls softball team – but only if you join it.” Just a suggestion, Evangeline … I don’t want to write it for you. : )

  • Amy Valentini says: April 30, 2010 at 3:54 pm

    I know what you mean, Nancy … two weeks is going to be a long time to wait to do another one … it’s a great writing exercise, it really works our imaginations and it’s wonderful to see other writers’ take on things. It’s also great to get feedback from our peers. There’s a lot of talent on this blog. Great job everyone, it’s been a lot of fun. Have a happy weekend.

  • Nancy says: April 30, 2010 at 1:34 pm

    This is addictive. I keep coming back hoping everyone has posted more.

  • Elaine Stevens says: April 30, 2010 at 5:48 am

    Thanks Amy.

  • Hattie I. Day says: April 30, 2010 at 3:57 am

    MIlly Headrick heard the thump of the Saturday morning newspaper as it landed on her porch. She was glad that Ben Daniels had been chosen to work the paper route. Ben was one of the brightest students at Hamilton High School and one of the best pitchers the school baseball team had ever had. For Ben, the paper route meant extra money and the opportunity to hone his pitching technique. For her, and the other neighborhood subscribers, it translated into always receiving a newspaper in its original condition.

    She was normally already halfway back home from her morning jog by now but she had stayed up until two a.m. working on teacher evaluations. Evaluations, ugh! Evaluating the teachers’ job performances was one of the most stressful aspects of her duties as principal of Hamilton High School. Milly slid into her robe and slippers, poured a glass of orange juice, and headed to get her morning paper. She wanted to at least look at the days headlines before beginning her usual Saturday morning routine.

    Milly turned the knob and opened the front door just enough to peek out and see the rolled-up newspaper. She glanced into the foyer mirror, tied her long auburn hair into a knot, and cinched the yellow satin robe. The moment that she stepped out onto the porch Mitch Jones rang the doorbell. Startled by his unexpected presence Milly tried to quickly retreat. Strike one. She lost her balance and fell backward into her living room floor. Mitch Jones’ gorgeous smile beaming down on her triggered a flood of memories that were better off forgotten. Standing on her doorstep was the best kiss she had ever had. “Are you okay Milly?”, he asked. “So, so Mitch. When did you get back into town?”, Milly stammered, as she was rising from the floor. ” I moved back two days ago. I have accepted a job here as a minor league coach. Actually, the job is one of the reasons I stopped by this morning Mil. I was hoping that if you are available that I might be able to convince you to accompany me to a gala next Saturday evening”, explained Mitch. “Sorry Mitch, but I have just started my annual teacher evaluations. I am just too busy”, replied Milly. “How about the following weekend then?”, he asked. “I suppose that I will be finished with the evaluations then. Let’s make it lunch though”, she countered. Mitch handed her the newspaper and she could smell the familiar scent of his cologne. Strike two. Her knees began to quiver…

  • Elaine Stevens says: April 29, 2010 at 7:39 pm

    I really enjoy reading these. So many different takes from the same prompts. :-) Great job one and all.

  • Elaine Stevens says: April 29, 2010 at 7:00 pm

    I don’t know if this is too long, but here’s what I came up with. This was fun!

    “Stupid jocks!” Alice Jennings grumbled as she ran around the track that morning before school. “Think school is just fun and games. Budgets are for education, not just sports.”

    She spent every morning releasing tension in this way. Since she got the job as principal of her alma matter, Memorial High, she learned that she could tolerate the stress of her job better when she let go of her anger before the day started. She often found herself saying words that would get the kids in her school detention if a teacher overheard them, but, at 6 a.m., she was usually alone on the track, so she could say whatever she wanted.

    This morning her wrath was focused on Coach Gardener who had barged into her office the previous afternoon complaining bitterly about the state of the baseball equipment the team had to work with for yet another year. They were the defending Indiana State Champions. They deserved better, according to him. He didn’t seem to realize that she was also negotiating with the teacher’s union over the loss of paraprofessionals for the special needs classrooms due to the cuts in state funding.

    “Should I take that personally?” a male voice quipped as he passed her by.

    “Where’d he come from?” Alice wondered before she stumbled over her feet. She cried out as she headed for a fall. Fortunately two muscular arms caught her in mid-air.
    “You okay?” the stranger asked.

    She stared at his broad chest and held on tight to well formed biceps as she stabilized. “Yeah! Thanks. I didn’t hear you behind me. I thought I was alone.” She inhaled deeply and sighed. She hadn’t been this close to a male of legal age since she dumped her last boyfriend, Ralph.

    “I guess jocks are good for something,” he said with a laugh.

    When Alice’s eyes crawled up this 6’5” frame to his well-sculpted face framed by dark brown wavy hair, she gasped. “It couldn’t be,” she whispered. Then she moaned involuntarily. “Jake Collins!” she said awkwardly. “I thought you were off playing baseball star somewhere in Texas.”

    She seemed familiar, but he couldn’t place this well built blonde whose firm backside he had been watching for the past five minutes while she muttered unintelligible oaths and punched her fists while she ran. He’d been trying to think of a way to introduce himself while he watched her bounce ahead of him, but she seemed to know him. He shouldn’t have been surprised, but he was.

    A decade ago, he left Elkhart to play baseball for IU on a sports scholarship. Then he spent a few years in the minors before finally being called to the show in Houston where he just couldn’t seem to hit. He returned to the minors with a batting average of .125 and nothing near a golden glove although he’d made a few plays he remembered with pride.

    When Elkhart built their minor league stadium on Country Road 17, Jake jumped at the chance to manage the team. He’d spent the last two seasons assisting, so he saw this as an opportunity to return to the majors in a different capacity eventually. Hey, Tommy Lasorda never won a game when he pitched for the Brooklyn Dodgers and look where he ended up.

    “I feel so dumb,” he said ruefully. “Do I know you?”

    Alice laughed. “Not really. You flunked Algebra, so I tutored you when you retook it during your senior year. You once said that nerds like me created math to torture guys like you.”

    “Wow! Alice the malice?” he asked stunned. Jake remembered Alice as the fat girl who always wore black and sat the back of the classroom reading novels, yet still got straight A’s. She used to sit by herself in the lunchroom writing weird stories she would post on the internet about witches and vampires. Everyone thought she was weird, but when she tutored him in Algebra, he actually understood it for the first time. He cringed. “Sorry! What an idiot! It’s just so weird seeing you.”

    “Don’t worry about it,” Alice said offhandedly. “Coach Gardner still calls me that, especially since the budget cuts.”

    “You work here?” Jake asked surprised.

    “I’m took over for Mr. Thompson when he retired,” Alice replied. “I’m the big cheese, you might say.”

    Jake laughed. “You’re the principal? No kidding!” Inwardly he felt like he was drowning. She was the smartest girl in his year, even if the other kids didn’t appreciate her. He suddenly felt like such a loser. “You look great! You’ve really changed.”
    She shrugged. “Thanks! I lost weight and got contacts. It’s been ten years after all.”

    “And you wear colors now,” Jake said lamely. He looked back down at those tight red sweatpants he’d been fantasizing about removing just a few minutes prior and grimaced before he added honestly, “I never would have graduated if it wasn’t for you. Did I ever thank you?”

    Alice laughed. “I think you leant me a pencil in Senior English once. We’ll call it even.”

    Alice turned when the gym door burst open and the entire baseball team hit the track for their morning workout. Alice sighed. Her day had begun. Yup, there was Coach Gardner sauntering toward her for round two of their budget debate.
    Jake looked at his watch. It was only 6:30. “Do you have time to get some breakfast before school starts? You’re the first person I’ve met that I know since I moved back.”

    She turned back to Jake. “Sounds great, but I need a shower and the special needs bus arrives at 7. I need to be out there to greet the kids. It’s one of those things I do.”

    The team passed them by with a smattering of “Hey Ms. Jennings!”

    “Hey guys!” Alice replied. “Gonna take Central on Friday?”

    A loud “Yeah!” came from the team as they trotted on.

    “Not if we don’t get that new equipment!” Coach Gardner barked as he walked up to them.

    Alice snorted and then looked up at Jake apologetically. “Nice to see you again, Jake. Sorry about breakfast.”

    The coach smiled broadly as he drew near. “Jake Collins! Great to see you! Maybe you can help us out with our principal here. She seems to think state championships can be won with equipment that was old when you played.”

    Alice threw her hands up. “I’m outta here! Nice seeing you, Jake. Good luck with your team.” Then she walked toward the gym to shower before work.

    “Wait!” Jake said. “Later, Coach!” he added waving back before returning his attention to Alice. “Can we have dinner or something? It would be great to catch up.”

    Alice stopped and stared at him. “You want to have dinner with me?”

    Jake grinned. “Of course! We could go to the Matterhorn or Gubi’s, maybe. I haven’t been there in years.”

    Alice laughed. “It has been a while, hasn’t it. Matterhorn only does catering now and Gubi’s isn’t there anymore at all.”
    “You pick the place. My treat!” Jake responded.

    He wasn’t going to let this go. Alice couldn’t believe it. He had barely looked at her in high school and now he was practically drooling on her Nike’s. “Sure,” she said. “Six okay for you? I live on Michigan near Bower in that old yellow duplex on the right headed north. I’m the one closest to the driveway.”

    Jake grinned. “Just up the street from the old video store. I used to go passed it all the time.”

    “They’re a bookstore now, but that’s the place.” Alice grabbed his arm again to check the time. “I’m so late. See yeah then.”
    Jake watched her run to the gym before joining the team on their morning workout.

  • Agnes says: April 29, 2010 at 2:01 pm

    (sorry this is so long – i was getting lost in back-story…)

    Taylor Blythe made her way through the stadium’s concrete hall after the game, smiling and nodding at thrilled parents and students as she went. She floated on a cloud of her team’s achievement – they hadn’t won, but a tie game between the A-list Tigers farm team and her high school boys was pretty damn good. She was incredibly proud, even if she hadn’t expected any less from the DCI Dolphins.

    She had had doubts about the exhibition game initially – the invitation had arrived out of the blue without ceremony or explanation. The mystery had set off warning bells for her, and she had almost turned down the offer, but for the final sentence of the informal letter. “Don’t worry, we’ll go easy on them,” it had said. Her school had the top team in their division – they knew how to play baseball. She had let the taunt get the better of her. But the benefits to her team were also obvious – not only did the game show off the high school boys’ skills against more experienced men, but opportunities might arise for minor league drafts or possibly even exposure to major league scouts.

    It had happened before…to him, the unmentionable. She still hated the sound of his name and refused to say it even in her head. She’d had to hear his name over and over after he’d been drafted from college and shot through the majors with his .365 batting average. Even if she had repeated it to herself all through school, that torment ended on her last sorry day of high school, spent unwillingly locked in the girls’ bathroom. She flushed with embarrassment at remembering she had actually hoped he would be the one to rescue her, even while knowing in her heart that he’d been busy feeling up the evil girl who had put her there. God, she had hated that vile excuse of a woman, and the horrible influence the bitch had held over the school’s most beautiful boy. A boy who stood by and watched his girlfriend trip her in front of the entire school during graduation. Taking on the position of principal at the school they had all graduated from had turned hearing his name into an almost hourly occassion, but she had somehow managed to make it through. And now that he had been unceremoniously dumped from his team amid a torrent of controversy, she wouldn’t have to try.

    A crowd gathered outside the men’s locker room. She felt an obligation to thank the team for inviting the school to play such a prodigious game, and a need to satisfy her curiosity about the source of the invitation. She hesitated behind the bodies of eager students, until the door to the change room opened a crack and her team’s star pitcher noticed her hiding in the crowd.

    “Get in here, Dr. Blythe,” he shouted. “We stink but we won’t bite!”

    A grinning crowd of students and parents parted to let her into the locker room. The kid was right – the whole room reeked of musky sweat and soapy showers. The pheronmone cocktail mixed odours that sent radar tingling across her skin. On the other side of the room the men from the farm team, mid-change out of their uniforms unifoms, jostled each other for bragging rights over their younger opponents. A few of them noticed her and gave her an approving once-over. She scanned their faces for some kind of friendly introduction, finding none until her gaze eventually landed on the upturned jean-clad tight ass of a player elbow-deep in the drink cooler. A few of her students were gathered around him and when they noticed her staring at him they started giggling. Even the boys.

    * * * * * * * * * *

    Will Reed heard the excited kids around him suddenly break out in nervous laughter. He grabbed the cold soda he’d been fishing for and spun around to see what was so funny. Standing in front of him was the woman he’d been hoping to run into – the reason he’d invited his old high school to play with his new team, despite his underlying humiliation at being on it. Her look of admiration – or was he imagining that? – vanished and her face fell at the moment of recognition. She said nothing, which was about how much she said when he’d known her in school. Everything else about her had changed.

    “Will Reed. We went to school together. Really glad you could accept our invitation to play today. Your team played well. Awesome pitching.” He held his hand out in re-introduction, although he was pretty sure she remembered him.

    “They’re good kids,” she replied, lifting her hand slowly to meet his as if she was having to force it. Her icy green eyes challenged him to deny her statement, but he had no wish to. He was hoping to talk her into letting him fill the school’s empty coaching slot. He needed the extra income and Taylor had turned the school into a baseball beacon for every teenager in the district. He’d always admired her strength, even though he’d never felt comfortable telling her. She had always stayed clear of him in school. He smiled at Taylor but she looked away.

    “Are you drinking beer?” She accused, staring at the cold can in his hand. The anger that she flashed at him carried more weight than a discretion-breach might warrant. Even if he’d made one.

    “In a way, I guess,” Will laughed, looking at the label and hoping to diffuse her fury. “It’s roo–”

    “Oh, I knew this was a bad idea,” she fumed before he finished his sentence, and stormed out of the locker room. The entire room went silent, staring at her wake.

    “Don’t worry, Mr. Reed,” piped up the school team’s star pitcher. “She’s hot for you.”

    Will wasn’t so sure. But he was going to have to change her mind.

  • Fotini says: April 29, 2010 at 5:48 am

    Hello everybody. I liked all posts. You have indeed very brilliant and imaginative minds. Good job!

  • Jen says: April 28, 2010 at 8:34 pm

    Elisabeth’s heels clicked down the hallway as if tapping out the rhythm to an angry song. As she turned the corner toward the lunchroom where she fully expected to find the troublemakers starting another food fight, she slammed into a hard masculine chest, jostling her glasses so that they slid down her nose just a bit. She put up a finger to push them back into place and said, “Oh, I’m so sorry!”

    “It’s fine,” the man responded, grasping her shoulders to steady her.

    Elisabeth looked up from the stack of papers she clutched to her chest and straight into the eyes of her high school crush. “Jonathan. What the hell are you doing here?”

    Jonathan held her gaze for a long moment. “To sign a student. Surely you must have heard by now about my fall from grace.”

    She shook her head swiftly, knocking a tendril of hair from her tight chignon. “I didn’t. I didn’t even know you were back in town.”

    “I am. I’m the new coach for the Sounds. There’s a senior here who’s showing a lot of promise. I’m here to recruit him.”

    “Michael Sullivan.”

    “That’s the one.” Jonathan paused. “Elisabeth, it’s been a long time–”

    Elisabeth stepped back from his grasp. “I have to go. It’s good to see you again. I’m sure I’ll see you around.”

    “Elisabeth, wait–”

    “Gotta run! So good to see you again, Jonathan.”

    She nearly ran down the hallway toward the lunchroom, desperate to hide from his searching gaze. He was exactly as she remembered: stormy blue eyes that saw straight to her soul, mahogany hair she ached to run her hands through, and a body as hard as a rock. She’d pined for him all through high school, and he hadn’t even known she was alive. Well, she didn’t think he did, but he obviously remembered her name. That was certainly a surprise since he’d had enough girls lined up in front of his house to form his own fan club.

    And Elisabeth was just another groupie. She would have done anything for him, damn him. She nearly had.

  • Danielle Yockman says: April 28, 2010 at 6:36 pm

    Karen looked up from her desk. He was standing there. Mr. Wonderful, Logan Drummond. Instantly she started to tip her head down letting her hair fall in her face like she used to do in high school when he walked in to chemistry. She froze. What the hell was she doing? She’s the principal now. His boss.

    “Mr. Drummond, welcome to Carson High, or should I say welcome back.” She stood and reached across her desk to shake his hand.

    “Mrs. Crane.” He shook her hand and sat in the empty chair across from her.

    She tried not to notice his too tight jeans and deep tan. “It’s Ms. actually.”

    “Well then, Ms. Crane. Thank you for seeing me.” He smiled.

    “What can I do for the Carson Colonials?”

    “I was hoping you might consent to letting us practice on the high school field. It’s summer and we need a place for camp while the stadium is being renovated.”

    She paused. He’d be around all summer long, just like old times. Except maybe this time he might remember who she was. Ridiculous as it was she wanted him to remember her.

    She wanted it a lot.

    “I think we can arrange something. Perhaps you would let our varsity players workout with you a couple of times while your team is here?”

    “That seems reasonable. If Coach Zanders doesn’t mind.” His eyes seemed to roving over her face. Maybe he did remember her.

    “Coach Zanders would love it, and so will the boys.” She felt herself smiling too big. She needed to settle down. They aren’t in high school anymore.

    “Anything else?” He sounded hopeful as he looked at her. She felt like his perusal had moved off her face and was now running the length of her body. Right through the desk.

    “No. We certainly support our local athletes. We are happy to help out.”

    “That’s good to know. I’ll have to remember that.” He smiled wickedly and she knew, he may not remember her from high school, but he noticed her now.

    “Please do.” The words came out husky. She licked her lips and reached for her water.

    He stood and walked to the door of her office. He opened it to leave, but turned back. “Thank you, and just so you know I remember lots of things.” He winked and disappeared.

  • Amy Valentini says: April 28, 2010 at 4:48 pm

    The air was filled with all of the excitement that accompanied opening day at the baseball field. The Dukes, Bridgeton’s minor league team was ready for the season opener or so Coach Tom Billings had told the local paper. As the stands filled with fans for both teams, Angie Norman worked her way along the front looking for a prime viewing spot. As the principal of the local high school, she knew most of the people already sitting in the stands and waved hello to most. As she raised her hand to give a wave to one of her former students, Angie tripped over something beneath her feet. Her clumsiness sent her sprawling onto the ground. Nearly everyone in the stands gasped as she fell. Several people leaped from their seats to come to her rescue but as Angie pushed herself up from the dirt, she felt strong hands take hold of each arm.

    “Wow, that was quite a tumble you took.” A deep voice exclaimed from above her. “You alright?! You’re not hurt are you?”

    Angie looked up into bright sunlight unable to see the face that went with the deep voice that seemed somehow familiar to her. Suddenly, the bright light was blocked out and a handsome smiling face came into view. Angie recognized that face and that smile for it belonged to Tom Billings. It had to be him of all people that came to aid, she thought with a long sigh.

    “Yes, I’m fine, thank you.” Angie got to her feet with Tom’s assistance. She quickly brushed the dirt from the front of her cashmere sweater and jeans. “More embarrassed than hurt, I think.”

    “Do I know you?” Tom asked looking her over more thoroughly than he should have. He liked what he saw. A pretty face, full mouth and body that he wouldn’t mind getting to know better.”

    “Actually, I know who you are but I don’t think you would remember me.” Angie replied, a blush rising on her cheeks as she felt Tom’s eyes wash over her body and face.

    “If you jog my memory, I’ll bet I do remember you.” Tom smiled then added. “Believe me, you’d be hard to forget.”

    “We went to high school together.” Angie answered, suddenly aware that everyone around them was keenly listening to their conversation. “I’m the principal there now.” Angie presented her hand to Tom. “Angie Norman.”

    “Angie Norman? Hmmm … doesn’t ring a bell, I’m afraid.” Tom accepted her hand and barely shook it but held it in his longer than was needed. “Did you look this good in high school?”

    Angie glanced around her. Her students, their parents and some of her staff were all sitting within earshot and it had become quiet enough to hear a pin drop. Angie rolled her eyes wishing she could will herself somewhere else at this moment but answered truthfully. “No, I didn’t but you look as good as you did then.”

    “Well, I’m not in as good a shape that’s for sure. Destroyed my knee first season out in the majors so now I’m coaching.” Tom said, still holding her hand. “I’m coaching the Dukes, in fact. You here to see us play today?” Of course, she’s here to see the game, he thought. “Here let me get you a great seat, we wouldn’t want you to miss a single play.”

    Tom led Angie to a seat right behind the dugout. Angie could feel everyone’s eyes on her but at the same time felt a thrill of excitement that Tom Billings, the guy that every girl wanted to date was still holding her hand and wanted her to sit behind the dugout which would put her very near to him. She knew come Monday morning she would be the talk of the school but right now with Tom smiling down at her as she took her seat, Angie was on top of the world.

    • Nancy says: April 28, 2010 at 5:56 pm

      Isn’t that always the way. The person we don’t want to see our stumbles is the one that comes to our rescue. I guess its that fine line between love and hate. Great Job. Yeah, she’ll be the talk of the teacher’s lounge come Monday.

    • Katrina says: April 29, 2010 at 8:09 am

      This one really tugged at my heart. Made me feel a bit weepy for her. Actually, I wanted to read more, so if you ever publish it…

      • Amy Valentini says: April 29, 2010 at 10:42 am

        Thanks, I’m glad it touched you like that and I’m very glad that you said you want to read more. I threw that together just for this blog in about ten minutes but ever since I did, the characters and story have been growing in my head. This might just be a new project for me, along with the other 2 I’m working on. Thanks for your feedback. : )

  • Paroma says: April 28, 2010 at 4:28 pm

    Ed Wilder walked down the corridor of his high school, taking in all the changes that had been made in the last ten years. The building was nearly empty now, a few straddlers remained near the lockers lining the walls. Some walked by him, talking and laughing, not really paying any attention to him.
    A part of him was relieved. He had craved attention once. Been obsessed with it.
    But the last two years had helped rid him of his fondness for the spotlight.
    Almost. He had to admit he was a little offended at not being recognized. Then again, he’d met the team he was going to coach yesterday and they had certainly known who he was.
    He exhaled in a huff and laughed softly to himself. Arrogant bastard.
    The principal’s office was around the corner and he sped up knowing that he was late for his appointment.
    He knocked on the door and waited for Principal Rain to ask him to come in. A few minutes ticked by. He tried the knob and found the door open.
    He entered to find an empty office. He looked around for the new principal. The office looked exactly as it had ten years ago- small and crowded. Filing cabinets and trophy showcases lined the walls. The large desk was piled with papers, though arranged in neat rows. He looked over the tower of papers, wondering if the new Principal might be small enough to hide behind them. Nope, the chair was empty.
    ‘Hello.’
    Ed whirled around to find himself facing Shirley Keller, his tenth grade chemistry lab partner.
    ‘Shirley!’ he exclaimed, surprised.
    ‘Ed!’ she exclaimed, mimicking him. Her eyes twinkled and she grinned.
    He smiled back. It had always been impossible not to smile back at her. ‘What are you doing here?’
    ‘Here?’ she asked, her eyes quizzical. ‘You mean in the principal’s office?’
    ‘Yes.’ He answered hesitantly, recalling her odd sense of humour.
    ‘Well,’ she said moving around him towards the desk, ‘I have an appointment here.’
    ‘Ah.’ He said intelligently, then pulled back a chair and sat down. His eyes did a quick review of her and found that she had retained all her curves from high school. The only difference that he could see, was that maturity had given her more confidence and her hair had grown out. Taking a chair opposite him, she quirked another smile at him.
    Ed remembered then that the only reason Shirley Keller had never dated in high school, was because Shirley had chosen not to. Brainy and dilligent, she’d been a class topper and very well liked by her class mates.
    ‘So how have you been?’ he asked politely.
    ‘Not as hounded as you for sure.’ she answered, her head tilting slightly, as if to assess him. ‘So what business do you have with Rain?’
    Ed’s smile had slipped a little at her casual reference to the chase the media had subjected him to last year. He answered a little gruffly, ‘I’m coaching the minor leagues and principal Rain is on the board that hired me. We have certain things to discuss and I agreed to meet her here, since I wanted to come by the school anyway.’ His fingers beat a tattoo on a small paper-free surface on the desk. ‘And you?’
    Shirley let out a short laugh. He frowned, again remembering how she had a way of making him feel like a clown performing for her amusement. Well, at least he was no longer feeling like an attention-seeking ex-Pro baseball player. He was just feeling like an idiot.
    Shirley shook her head slightly and said ‘It’s mean of me, but it was always so hard to laugh at you, I can’t help enjoying myself a little now.’
    Ed raised a brow in question, while inside he was recalling his sixteen year old self and wondering how he’d tolerated this smug know-it-all.
    She answered, still grinning, ‘Ed Wilder, welcome to my school, I am Principal Rain and I’m terribly offended that you don’t remember that you used to call me ‘Rainy’. It’s my middle name, I’ve dropped the Keller.’
    Ed closed his eyes and found himself smiling. Ah well, he was going to find out if he still had it in him to take on Shirley Rain Keller.

  • Nancy says: April 28, 2010 at 2:51 pm

    Ok, here is mine.

    In the outer office, the secretary and a resource teacher dealt with the students lined across the counter wanting absentee notes filled or appointments with the guidance counselor. Behind her closed door, Nina Leggett could hear the orchestrated chaos of a Friday morning at James Madison High, home of the Patriots. To add to the fray, today happened to be Career Day where local businesses from dog walkers to the crème de la crème, a local senator for the state, would entertain the students explaining the importance of education to their positions. By far, the name that caught everyone’s attention, including hers, this fine spring day – Logan Cash.
    She closed her eyes and recalled his cocky, self-confident style. Nothing seemed to faze him. He’d spent his school hours entertaining the cheerleaders or making fun of those deemed less important. She shifted on her feet at the memory. Life to Logan was a game, one that he played well. A jock, Logan had more time to play sports than to open books. His senior year, he’d crossed swords with the matriarch of United States history, the formidable Miss Ann Harvey. On the verge of failure, not his parents, the coach, or even the principal could stop the impending doom of failure.
    That’s when they’d come to her. The Committee for No Good Reason, she’d called them. The coach, the principal, and his father standing with their hats in hand as she opened the door to the apartment Nina shared with her mother. Each of them implored her to help, campaigning for their golden boy, the one that would put Suffolk, Virginia on the map. His father owned a car dealership. He’d promised her the use of a demonstrator car so she could make tutoring.
    Nina shook her head. She should have turned them down for all the good it seemed to have done. However, like any other girl in James Madison, she’d been madly in love-. No, she thought, infatuated would be the better word. She had been infatuated with him. Everything he did seemed to end up front page news. Well, almost everything. Nina looked down at the single gold band she wore on her finger as a reminder. She’d been able to keep one thing off the front pages.
    She pressed a manicured nail through the slats of the mini blinds that opened to the front parking lot. Already the circus had begun. A maroon SUV pulled into the parking lot. Before the occupant could emerge, news reporters, cameramen, and autograph seekers rushed forward to swarm the vehicle. The door opened. Her heart pounded against her ribs as a familiar head covered with dark curls came into view.
    Damn, couldn’t he at least be bald, she thought. Suddenly, it seemed as if fifteen years faded away. The sun caught his profile and she watched as his lips pulled back along his strong jaw accenting the dimples in his cheeks. The grin, still as self-confident as ever, made her shake her head. Light bulbs flashed. She heard the doors on the front of the school bang. More people gathered around the car as a horn blared from someone trying to get through. “Like a moth to the flame,” she said in a wry comment and picked up the walkie-talkie on her desk.
    “Mr. Sanders.” She spoke in to the receiver. “Meet me out front please. We have a problem.”
    A problem she’d rather not confront. Static ceased and she heard the janitor’s voice. “I’m on my way. Coach Brandon just told me who was here.”
    Yes, he was here, in all his glory. That summed it up rather well. “Humph,” she grumbled and picked up her keys to the building. She was no longer that little geeky girl with the crush, who’d lost her heart along with other things to the stud of the year. 1995 faded and this was a new century and a new woman, one that Logan Cash couldn’t make feel like a fool. Gone was little Nina Dawn Leggett. Before him would stand the principal of James Madison High and if Logan wanted to stay, he’d have to play by her rules like it or not. Deep down, she prayed he wouldn’t like it. If he left, it would solve a whole lot of problems she’d rather not open.
    Walking through the office, she pushed open the front doors and made her way to the edge of the sidewalk. Just like old times, Logan was leaning against the car, talking about baseball. She stood and listened waiting for him to conclude his statements.
    ***
    “I’d love to have spent another year in the majors, but as you know, an injury like a rotator cuff is hard to come back from.” Logan Cash smiled at the woman standing a few feet from him with a microphone shoved in his face. He’d heard these questions before. His answers were nearly instinctive. Yeah, he’d torn his rotator cuff, what he’d failed to mention was that it was due to a motor cycle accident and the woman riding with him had lost so much more. A kid pushed through handing him his glove.
    “Could you sign this, please, Mr. Cash? You’re one of my heroes.”
    “Sure kid,” he pulled the gangly young man by the arm and had him step next to him while uncapping the permanent marker. He wanted to make sure the camera caught his good Samaritan act. It might help his bid to get back into the majors. From the corner of his eye, he caught the glimpse of a heavyset man rushing toward him wearing a pair of blue pants and a tan shirt, – the janitor. Good thing the kid came forward now. “Here kid.” He shoved the glove back at the star stuck teenager.
    “Can you both hold the glove?” a photographer called out.
    “Sure,” Logan replied. “Turn around and smile kid, this is your big day.”
    The burst of light bulbs nearly blinded him as photographer after photographer stepped up to snap the day’s headline. He was basking in his element when she spoke up.
    “Excuse me Mr. Cash.”
    That cold tone was one he’d never forget. He turned and a pair of steely eyes to match the blue of a northern winter stared back.
    “I hate to break up this impromptu social, but my students have an hour of class before the rotation starts.”
    A chorus of groans met her words.
    “Education is important,” Logan spoke loudly, hoping they’d all hear. “Without an education, I wouldn’t be where I am today. I’ll see you all on the ball field in a bit. Go to class, I’m not going to be responsible for holding students in after school detention.”
    The crowd dispersed. The cameras left and the microphones faded as everyone moved toward the building. Everyone, except of course, her. He pushed away from his SUV and stepped onto the sidewalk. She’d grown since the last time he’d seen her. Gone were the braces and the long braided ponytail. Before him stood a woman filled with the curves to delight, if he could just get past the icy exterior.
    Turn on the charm, Logan, my boy, his inner devil whispered rearing his head. “You’re a sight for sore eyes, Nina.”
    “Ms. Leggett,” she replied in a detached tone. “Mr. Cash, if you’ll follow me, we’ll get you to the ball field.”
    She turned and began walking away without him. He quickly caught up and took hold of her elbow.
    “I remember were the ball field is.” He paused for dramatic effect. “Don’t you?”
    If looks could kill, Logan was sure an undertaker would be already called. Her fingers peeled his from the side of her arm. “Mr. Cash, you are here to do a Career Day presentation, not to practice the next line you’d use in a bar.”
    His mouth gaped.
    “Mr. Sanders,” she called out and raised a hand. “Show Mr. Cash to his place and when he’s through escort him back to his car.” She turned, her eyes narrowing with revulsion. “We wouldn’t want to keep you from your next interview, would we?”
    Logan Cash watched her walk away. The smooth lines of her skirt swaying to the turn of her hips and he knew he had to see her again.

  • Rose Pressey says: April 28, 2010 at 9:48 am

    What a fun idea. Here’s my entry:

    “Are you all right? I had no idea you’d run out on the field.”

    Elise reached her arm out beside her and fumbled for her eyeglasses. Please don’t let them be broken. The grass tickled her hand. Her fingers finally grasped the frame and she shoved the glasses on her face. Of course, now they set lopsided. But at least her vision was clear and she got an up close and personal view of him. And what a view it was, she thought. She’d recognize that face and body anywhere. Ryan Mitchell, high school baseball star.

    Elise blinked up at him. Yes, she approved of his cropped sun-kissed blond hair and blue eyes. He was a fine specimen. She even liked the little line between his furrowed brows. She stopped herself from taking a big whiff of him. He smelled good.

    She let out a breath and sat up. “I’m okay, I think. I’m sure this knot on my head while fade soon. I’ll wear a big hat for a few days.”

    What had she been thinking? She could have waited until after their practice to tell Ryan off. Instead, she’d landed on her ass when the ball had whizzed by. It hadn’t actually hit her, but it had come darn close. She’d lost her balance. But who wouldn’t while running on grass in heels. Years had past but she was the same old clumsy girl on the inside.

    “You’re Principal Madison, aren’t you?” He stretched his lean-muscled arm toward her. “Let me help you up.”

    Her heart sank a little. Of course he wouldn’t recognize her. He’d barely noticed her in high school.

  • Katrina says: April 28, 2010 at 9:27 am

    Argh! I hit ‘submit’ too early and then had to rush to work. Sorry, here’s my full one:

    Josie scanned the sparse crowd lounging on the bleachers along the third-base line. She recognized several of her seniors, but that wasn’t a problem. It was a Saturday, after all.

    The one she was looking for would be in uniform. Eighteen years old and a promising writer, he’d just dropped out of school after being “recruited” for this local team.

    She snorted. Recruited to the minor leagues.

    What a waste of a brain.

    Her eyes ran over the players warming up on the field, but she didn’t see Sam among them. She glanced at the home team’s dugout, her innate teacher-sense zeroing in on her target.

    Gathering up her backpack of sandwiches and soda – after all, there was no reason she couldn’t enjoy the game after the Tempter of Promising Students a piece of her mind – she marched across the diamond to the dugout.

    “Heads!”

    Josie dropped her bag and covered her head with her arms, crouching down just between the pitcher and catcher. When a ball didn’t bomb her skull, she peered out between her elbows to see everyone staring at her. Everyone except the fans in the bleachers, who had caught a stray ball. It hadn’t even come close to hitting her.

    It was just like playing dodgeball in high school gym all over again.

    With her face burning, she took another step but stopped when the man of her nightmares stepped out of the dugout.

    Casey Taylor. The boy who’d stood on the edge of the dodgeball circle laughing his ass off when she’d nearly been hit.

    His facial muscles twitched like he was trying to control a smirk. Apparently some boys never grow up.

    Fortunately, nerdy girls usually do.

    “Heya, Jose.”

    She inclined her head. “Despoiler of Innocents.”

    That wiped the grin off his face like nothing else.

    She pointed at Sam, who was doing his best to disappear into an equipment bag. “That boy over there could be anything. Anything. And you want him to play baseball?”

    He looked her up and down. “You look different. What happened to your coral jeans?”

    “The decade changed and I burned them.”

    The smile came back. “Did you burn what’s underneath them, too?”

    Oh. Dear. God. The part of the memory she’d tried to block out. Playing dodgeball in her uniform skirt because she’d forgotten her gym shorts in the laundry at home. Crouching to avoid a ball. Losing her balance and exposing her period underpants – the big beige nylon ones.

    She squared her shoulders, pushing out the chest that had developed three years too late. “Yup. I wear a thong now. But the only way you’ll ever see it is if I’m wearing a skirt and accidentally walk over a vent.”

    She waited for his face to flush before walking back to the bleachers, putting some extra swing in her step.

    There was no joy in Studville, for mighty Casey had struck out.

  • Saranna says: April 28, 2010 at 8:28 am

    Oh, what fun! I love doing these. A friend of mine and I do this kind of thing late night. A prompt, a short word count and a prop. It really gets the creative ball rolling, so to speak.

    Okay. Here’s mine:

    It should be illegal for a man’s butt to look that good. Especially on that man. Jenna Riley watched it move with every step he took down the pasta aisle at Piggly Wiggly. She was hypnotized by the way his Wranglers hugged the hard glutes and thighs. She’d hoped he’d gotten fat, that the years had been unkind to the form which had served as the dress up Ken doll in most of her high school fantasies.

    But no, the bastard. Cole Thomas looked as good as he ever did. He even ate carbs. At his age, it should have all gone to the middle age man-spread, but his hind quarters were still perfect.

    “So do I pass?”

    Jenna realized with a numb horror her quarry had turned on her and she’d been staring with mouth-breather admiration, blatantly checking his package.

    What was she supposed to say? He was used to women falling all over themselves, especially mousy little girls like herself. No, no, she wasn’t Rat-faced Riley anymore. She was a grown woman. This wasn’t high school.

    “You haven’t changed a bit,” Jenna said, hoping she sounded neither uninpressed, or interested.

    “You’ve changed a lot, Riley.” He made a show of looking her up and down.

    “I have. The least of which being it’s Dr. Riley now.” Damn. Why did she feel the need to whip out her academic dick every time someone made her question her place in the world?

    “I’m still just Cole,” he shrugged.

    She hated him more than she wanted him. Okay, that was a lie, but the ease with which he said this last, it made her feel something she couldn’t put her finger on, but didn’t like.

    “Well, ‘Just Cole’, I’d been meaning to call you since I heard you were back,” Jenna said and forced a smile. Yeah, like she’d ever call him. The Universe would implode if she’d ever done such a thing.

    “Oh yeah?” A lazy grin curled the corner of his mouth.

    “Yeah.” Yeah, what? Hey, stupid, finish your thought. Don’t leave it hanging like… “I thought you could come talk to the students. Positive role model and all that.”

    His smile hardened. “Kids aren’t my thing.”

    “Yeah, ain’t that the truth,” Allison Beck, former cheerleader and current Piggly Wiggly cashier said as she breezed by them.

    Jenna couldn’t help but wonder if the dark-haired boy she had in tow was Cole’s son.

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  • Katrina says: April 28, 2010 at 2:46 am

    Josie scanned the sparse crowd lounging on the bleachers along the third-base line. She recognized several of her seniors, but that wasn’t a problem. It was a Saturday, after all.

    The one she was looking for would be in uniform. Eighteen years old and a promising writer, he’d just dropped out of school after being “recruited” for this local team.

    She snorted. Recruited to the minor leagues.

    What a waste of a brain.


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